آیا متن می‌تواند کودک را به آغوش گیرد؟ کندوکاو خواننده‌ی نهفته در داستان‌های کتاب‌های درسی فارسی دوره‌ی اول دبستان (اول تا سوم)

نوع مقاله : مقاله پژوهشی

نویسنده

استادیار دانشگاه علامه طباطبائی، دانشکده روانشناسی و علوم تربیتی، گروه آموزش و پرورش

چکیده

آیا متن می‌تواند کودک را به آغوش گیرد؟
کندوکاو خواننده‌ی نهفته در داستان‌های کتاب‌های درسی فارسی دوره‌ی اول دبستان (اول تا سوم)
 
سودابه شکراله‌زاده*
 
 
چکیده
هدف کلی این تحقیق  بررسی خواننده‌ی نهفته در داستان‌های کتاب‌های درسی فارسی دوره‌ی اول دبستان (اول تا سوم) بر اساس نظریه‌ی «خواننده‌ی درون کتاب» ایدن چمبرز است. به‌دنبال این هدف کلی بر سه هدف جزئی تمرکز می‌شود: بررسی توانایی داستان‌های به‌کاررفته در این کتاب‌ها در به درون متن کشیدن مخاطب؛ کشف مفهوم کودک نهفته در این داستان‌ها و بررسی این موضوع که آیا این داستان‌ها را می‌توان اثر کودک دانست یا خیر. این تحقیق نشان می‌دهد کیفیت شگردهای خواننده‌ی نهفته (سبک، زاویه‌ی ‌دید، طرفداری و شکاف‌های داستانی) در این داستان‌ها به‌صورتی است که احتمال اینکه بتواند خواننده را درون متن بکشد اندک است. کودک نهفته در داستان‌ها، کودکی ناآگاه و ناقص از نظر شناختی است که زیر سایه‌ی سنگین اقتدار بزرگ‌سال باید به تعلیمی‌گراییِ غلیظی تن دهد تا به نقطه‌ی غایی رشد مدنظر بزرگ‌سال دست یابد. کودک باید به‌هنجار شود و کدهای اخلاقی، دینی، فرهنگی و اجتماعی جامعه‌ی بزرگ‌سال را اجرا کند و همانند بزرگ‌سال سخن گوید و بیندیشد. کودک در جایگاه وسیله‌ای بازنمایی می‌شود که باید در سویه‌ی تجربه، آگا‌هی و جامعه‌پذیری محض گام بردارد. گرایشی به کودک‌زدایی به چشم می‌خورد که این گرایش با شیوه‌هایی مانند آموزش مستقیم، تن‌ندادن به گفت‌وگو با کودک، زیبایی‌شناسی‌زدایی، انتقال مستقیم کدهای اخلاقی، دینی و اجتماعی بزرگ‌سالانه، عاری‌بودن داستان‌ها از تخیل، عاطفه، بازی‌گونگی و شیطنت‌های کودکانه و رقیق‌کردن طنز اعمال می‌شود. به‌جز دو داستان پری‌کوچولو و روباه و خروس به‌دشواری می‌توان دیگر داستان‌ها را آثار کودکی دانست که بتوانند با کودک ارتباط گیرند.
واژه‌های کلیدی: ایدن چمبرز، خواننده‌ی نهفته، داستان، کتاب‌های درسی فارسی دبستان، کودک.
 
* استادیار گروه آموزش و پرورش دانشگاه علامه طباطبائی Shokrollahzadeh.sue@atu.ac.ir
تاریخ دریافت مقاله: 18/3/1400             تاریخ پذیرش مقاله: 9/9/1400

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عنوان مقاله [English]

Does the Text Embrace the Child? the Implied Reader in the Stories of the Elementary School Persian Textbooks (the first three-years)

نویسنده [English]

  • Soudabeh Shokrollahzadeh
Faculty of psychology and educational sciences, department of education, ATU, Allameh Tabataba'i University
چکیده [English]

Does the Text Embrace the Child? the Implied Reader in the Stories of the Elementary School Persian Textbooks (the first three-years)
Soudabeh Shokrollahzadeh
Assistant professor of education, department of education, Allameh Tabataba'i University
 
Introduction
In the National Curriculum of the Islamic Republic of Iran eleven areas of teaching and learning are defined, one of which is "Persian language and literature". In this document, the approach to teaching of this area is "communicative" which not only orients the classroom teaching and learning, but also pervades other mediators such as elementary school Persian textbooks, wherein the communicative approach is more outstanding than other textbooks; because they mainly deal with literature, which is the manifestation of language. From Bakhtin's point of view, language essentially addresses, that is "all language is addressed to someone, never uttered without consciousness of a relationship between the speaker and the addressee" (Guerin et al, 2005: 362).  Therefore, any media dealing with language (whether oral, written, or visual) always forms a relationship with the audience, so does the elementary school Persian textbooks. It is therefore impotent to address how Persian textbooks communicate with their audiences through their stories, as this communication plays role in the child's construction of subjectivity.
Research method, literature and the research purpose
This research is qualitative. The samples are fourteen stories of elementary school Persian textbooks (the first three-years). Data analysis method is deductive-inductive content analysis in terms of which I analyze the samples based on the components of Aiden Chambers' theory of "the reader in the book", namely, style, point of view, taking sides and tell-tale gaps, as well as the criterion of " taking sides of children and adolescents as the fictional characters" as proposed by the picturebook group of SUCCLS.
The literature review reveals that the issue of implied reader in textbooks has especially been taken as a theoretical framework in mathematics and geometry, but it is understood and applied differently from what Chambers conceptualizes. As far as the objective of this research is concerned, it purports to investigate the implied reader of the stories of elementary school Persian textbooks (the first three-years) based on Aiden Chambers theory of "the reader in the book". In this connection there are three objectives: 1. Investigating the ability of stories used in Persian textbooks in drawing the readers in to the text 2. Discerning the embedded child in the stories 3. Examining whether these stories can be considered as children's works.
Discussion
In this section, I investigate Chambers' components of implied reader in the stories.

Style

In the analysis of style, plot, tone, figures of speech, imagery, choice of words, omissions occurred in the process of retellings, simplification and compression of stories in the retellings are considered. The main weakness of plot in most stories is underdeveloped obstacles the protagonists face to conquer. In other words, the plot is devoid of serious challenges or they are very superficial in that a character rather than the child solves the problems quickly; while no space of inquiry, problem-solving, decision-making and constructing subjectivity is left for the child. Imageries are weak too. The words are very formal and adult-like and sensory verbs are rarely used. The tone of speech is serious, cold, and distant from the child. It is used in an abstract and descriptive way. The omission of parts of the story and fading the humor are stylistic changes in retellings that has reduce the aesthetics of the work.

point of view

The omniscient and limited third person point of view are the two dominant points of view for narrating these stories. Surprisingly, no stories are narrated in first peson and the child is not the narrator.

Taking side

Due to strict educational goals, most of the stories do not take side of children as much as they should, and hence, didacticism leaves no space for being child-likeness, and experiencing childhood. The tone of the narrator in these stories is warning and cautionary; The child has obey  the adult's warnings about the consequences of her/ his actions and not transgressing them, otherwise s/he will be faced with the result of her/his behavior.

Tell-tale gaps

Regarding tell-tale gaps, there are deep deficiencies. The stories do not call for the ambiguity and not allowing the reader to have different interpretations so that the reader cannot participate in meaning-making. It seems that the reason for this is the tendency towards strong didacticism, in that the priority is the message transmitted, not giving space to the audience to create meaning.
Conclusion
In this research, I have investigated three questions: 1. Can the stories used in the elementary school Persian textbooks draw the child into the text? How do these stories establish relationship with the child? 2. What concept of the child is embedded in these stories? 3. Can these stories be considered children's work or not? The answer to the first question is negative.  the concept of child embedded in these stories is a static child who does not participate in meaning-making and imagination. The stories do not "halve this matter amicably". S/he is an ignorant and cognitively incomplete being whom, under the heavy shadow of adult authority, must submit to intense didacticism in order to reach the adulthood developmental endpoint. Given the findings, the answer to the third question seems negative. But what is the solution? I suggest that the textbook policymakers and authors need to benefit from existing children's literature which can both meet the goals of literacy and language learning intended by formal education and establish a democratic relationship with the child by taking her/him into account.
Keyword: Aiden Chambers, Implied Reader, Story, Elementary school Persian textbooks, Child
 
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کلیدواژه‌ها [English]

  • Keyword: Aiden Chambers
  • Implied Reader
  • Story
  • Elementary school Persian textbooks
  • Child
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